Making writing

by Mark Pollard on June 12, 2009 · View Comments

in Digital strategy

There are way too many blogs about blogging. But, I just wanted to make a few observations about blogs and also throw out some thoughts on writing.

The problems with your blog

1. You don’t originate thought
So many blogs just feature other people’s ideas and thoughts. “Blah blah from Company X said this… and I agree… and here are 3 examples that prove my point about this other person’s point.” A bit of this is cool but, seriously, back yourself and put some new ideas out there. And do it in the next week, please.

2. You think your reader rates you
So many blogs feature sprawling long-form content. An interested reader is probably averaging one-and-a-half to two minutes on a typical blog post. Make it easy on them. One thousand words without sub-headings? Don’t do it.

3. You lack opinion
A lot of blogs pretend to have opinion but are really just reporting… and, like I said above, many are just reporting other people’s opinions. Pick a side, make a case, prove your point and make it interesting. It’s good for the soul. Opinions can change. It’s OK. Humans do that.

4. You spend too much time writing for other bloggers
A lot of comments on this and every other blog are from… other bloggers. It’s great. But I get huge kicks when I get a comment from someone that I know who doesn’t blog, who is rarely online. When that happens, I feel like I’ve accomplished something. I’ve stirred someone who finds this world foreign to express their opinion to people they are strangers to.

5. You don’t make it chunky
I’m a big fan of the chunk – you know, an idea, an article, a blog that isn’t some sugary, lite bit of thinking. Something substantial. Something you can chew on. Something you’ll burp up later and smell on your breath. Yes, now you’re with me. Have a go at writing a little less often but making it deeper; feel nervous about pressing ‘publish’… “Do I really want to put that much honesty out there?” It’s a cool feeling.

Making writing

I write to be read. I’m proudly incomplete – and completely flawed. I accept this. It’s very liberating. But, I’m still keen to share 5 things I’m into when it comes to writing with you. Rules? Nah. Rule-like? Now, you’re just being tricky.

1. Make your points before you make your point
As a writing practice, I like getting an idea then writing 5-10 punchy points… Away.From.The.Computer … I’ll write them down in a few minutes of mania and inspiration but I won’t flesh them out until I’m actually typing. I’ll try to find a theme early. Then, when I write, I just… write. No over-thinking here, that’s for sure. Most people are scanning your writing anyway!

2. Make it different or don’t make it at all
It’s such an obvious point but I really find that our society beats the desire to be different out of us so much. We LOVE different. So be it or don’t do it.

3. Make music – not block text
Play with the rhythm. Make a long point. Then a short one. Wack in an image, then a video. Mix it up. All the time.

4. Make it incomplete
Writing and relationships are all about drama. Being incomplete creates drama because it leaves room for other people to add ideas, debate, reduce. Enjoy not knowing.

5. Make it you
So, I’ve written a bit lately about running a magazinea hip hop magazine… an underground hip hop magazine. I never used to talk about it in the corporate world because some clown would always put up a W sign (“Wesssssyde”). It happened the other day. It makes me curdle. But, if a lot of your blogging is connected to your profession, throw in analogies from your personal life. Just be yourself. It makes it more interesting. Too many career-types who blog… they are way too similar… and you all have the same style of profile photo. Mix it up! The world might just remember you for it.

Got a thought on common blog problems or ideas about writing?
Do share.

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  • @Evan Just checked your blog and see your interest in asking questions. Asking questions is great but do you think you need profile/connection as you already obviously have (as a writer and as part of News Ltd) for it to get traction? If anything, asking a question connects to one of my points about being incomplete - not knowing, inviting thought.

    What was one of the questions you asked on the blog that provided the most interesting discussion?
  • Interesting ideas, but I'm going to go against the grain here and say I'm not sure I agree that not having a strong opinion presents any serious problem. Maybe you're right, in a general sense: I doubt you are, but I don't even have a strong opinion about having a strong opinion. I reckon fundamental uncertainty can keep a blog going strong for years. Most of the time when someone has a strong opinion all they are showing is a refined arrogance compensating a limited imagination and/or a general intellectual lethargy.

    More important than having a strong opinion, I would suggest, is involving the reader. It's their opinions that matter most, not yours, and if you give them a direct route to being involved in a topic then you're going to keep their attention and probably get a response.

    As such, I wonder if asking good questions is not more important than anything you have listed above. If you really want to get your readers involved in a topic, what could possibly be better than a fantastic question that gets them thinking?
  • @Alison Agree. I think a lot of people curious about Twitter find that one hard.

    @Gav Agree. I write for myself.

    @Ivan Yes, thanks for the tingle. Was fantastic.

    @James Your voice? Can't your voice just be how you talk to your friends?

    @Jess What's the link to your blog? Blogging is like going to the gym for me... with kids, you gotta do what you can and just enjoy while it's happening :)
  • Jess
    This is great Mark. I've started so many blogs but have never followed through because I thought every post had to be epic and deep... the key is really to post, and to post like I read - in short energetic bursts. Maybe I'll stick with it this time...
  • Ben Shepherd
    First 5 points are spot on mate but I'm not sure about the rules bit.
  • Excellent post. There's only one thing worse than people who blog about blogging and that's twits that tweet about twitter. Soooooo over it.
  • Good points, well made. As always Mark. Nice one!
  • As a newbie, am trying to work out what 'my voice' is. And who 'my audience' might be. Still dunno. Love this piece tho. So thank you.
    The US bog-blogs all tell me how to get numbers. numbers. numbers. But I'd rather have readers who care. In time I'll work out how! I'll find a 'rhythm'. Nice. ta.
    J
  • Ivan
    dude, nice post. not a frequent blogger, but always luv reading ur stuff.. hope that gives you a tingle in ur nether regions ;p
  • I think some of this shifts as we become more comfortable with our "blogging selves" - or as we reach a level of maturity with our writing.

    A lot of people try and write for their audience ... but I always think that we should write for ourselves. We should write the type of blog that we like to read. Otherwise we end up self-censoring the good stuff.
  • Excellent post, especially number 5; it's always scary to put yourself out there, but an honest voice is a rare thing and people usually respond better than you think.
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